Spring pulls back the rug
points at winter’s housekeeping
and wields a fierce broom.
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Fierce broom
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4 responses to “Fierce broom”
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Hahah! Cute poem 🙂
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I can see Spring, in a cotton housedress like the ones my mother and grandmother wore when I was little, with her hair bound up in a bandanna and her broom firmly in her hand.
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That was my image too, of your mother, I suppose, although I’m not sure I ever saw her dressed that way. Still, she’s in my head!
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