My sleep is like

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pearls
on a worn string

slipping down the line from one
hour to the next

of jewelled slumber but in between
a frayed cord of anxious waking,

hot turning, grasping for a lifeline that
my sweaty touch disintegrates, dreams

clattering to the floor
and here I am again, awake

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4 responses to “My sleep is like”

  1. Frances Horibe avatar
    Frances Horibe

    Hi Ellen

    Lovely poem—I think it really captures the frustration of sleeplessness. I also love the image of the dreams clattering to the floor and waking the poet.

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    1. ellensymons avatar
      ellensymons

      Thank you, Frances! I get many opportunities to polish these pearls.

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  2. marty6446 avatar
    marty6446

    Hi Ellen

    This is lovely as always and I can close my eyes and visually imagine your words. For me, it’s part of the joy of reading well written work. You make me see as well as feel.

    I hope you are well ……… Love, Marty

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    1. ellensymons avatar
      ellensymons

      Marty, I’m well, and thanks as always for your kind … and visual … poetry participation. Love, Ellen

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